13. Some people think that foreign visitors should be charged more than locals when they visit culture and tourist attractions in a country.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Tourism brings several benefits to the country and it gives exposure of different countries’ cultures to foreign nationals. A opine has been raised that, international visitors should be paid more than domestic people. I am agreed with that notion and I intend to discuss my viewpoint in following paragraphs.
There are numerous reasons why they should pay more. To begin with, governments of many countries do not have enough fund to allocate on refurbishment of tourist’s sites and historical buildings. If tourist devote more money to these places, the management of these sites can better maintain these places, leading to better overall experience. For instance, the history museum of the new Delhi takes extra money from international visitors and it is well maintained as compare to other historical hotspots, where they charge similarly to every visitor. Moreover, the better services can be provided to the international visitors for their improving their understanding of the cultures. For example, tourists’ guides can also be employed for the international people to aid them in understanding the cultures and traditions of the countries.
Also, the food markets and every leisure facilities are usually expensive. While locals cannot afford it, tourist enjoy all the facilities because they have high currency rates as comparison to visiting countries and Therefore, they can easily spend on these amenities and high prices are justified.
To sum up, high fairs are crucial for development as well as maintenance of the tourist or cultural buildings, and for providing exceptional service for the foreign nationals and it mainly benefit the visitors.
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...for the foreign nationals and it mainly benefit the visitors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50193050193 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96688440371 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629343629344 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1177936289 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.75 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248142123142 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838038433409 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460040484272 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133947081978 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548454023069 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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