Write a letter to your friend ask him /her to look after your house in your absence, give reasons for your travel and any specific instructions/ request.
Dear Mohit,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this letter to request you to take care of my house for seven days as I have to go India to see my family.
Last week, my grandfather met with an accident and admitted to hospital. As you know I have to be there in this hard time to support my family emotionally or financially too. I am very close to my grandfather because he supported me every time and how can I forget that he sold his property when I needed money to study in Canada. I will be here after one week so that is why I am requesting you to keep an eye on my house.
I have already done some preparations for you, like, you will get the keys from my next Neighbours. I have filled the fridge with eatable items and mainly for you I have put two corona beer cases. You know that I have fishes in a fish tank in my drawing room so I put the all stuff that that you need under fish tank. I will be back on the 30th may so I need you be there till 30th. It would be my pleasure I you stay long so after returning back we can spend some time together.
In case you cannot make it then let me know as soon as possible so I can do some other arrangements.
Yours lovingly,
Manmohan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ting you to keep an eye on my house. I have already done some preparations for...
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Line 7, column 101, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...l get the keys from my next Neighbours. I have filled the fridge with eatable ite...
^
Line 7, column 283, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: that
... my drawing room so I put the all stuff that that you need under fish tank. I will be bac...
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Line 7, column 433, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returning'.
Suggestion: returning
...be my pleasure I you stay long so after returning back we can spend some time together. In...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, so, then, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 32.9175257732 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 977.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 244.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.00409836066 4.54256449028 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25689468875 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577868852459 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.9 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.895354042 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1538461538 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7692307692 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23076923077 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0682427383617 0.216113520407 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381881546807 0.0766984524023 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674508124085 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0347985618194 0.12726935374 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386797119446 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.92 8.71597938144 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.34 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.