Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? My lifestyle is easier and more comfortable than the one my grandparents experienced when they were young. Use specific details and examples to support your answer.
Over the last few decades, lifestyle has become a very controversial topic of discussion. I am of the opinion that nowadays people have a more convenient lifestyle. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, the technology has become affordable and widespread for more people. Consequently, we rely on these technologies in our life which make the lifestyle easier than ever before. My personal experience is a compelling illustration for this. When I was a student at the university, I used the internet to find any information I need and to gain the research papers for my projects. On the other hand, my grandfather used to read many books to acquire only one piece of information. This example demonstrates how modern life is easier and more comfortable than in the past.
Second, the modern transportation systems and infrastructures make traveling more convenient. The spread of automobiles and well-built roads around the world make transporting from one place to another a simple experience. However, these transportation methods were not available in the past. For instance, nowadays, I can travel to Saudi Arabia by car and the trip will take only five hours. On the other hand, when my grandparents traveled to Saudi, the trip took about three months using horses and camels.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that our lifestyle is uncomplicated and more simple than one of my grandparents. This is because of the availability of technologies and the presence of modern transportation methods.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, second, so, well, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 254.0 407.700716846 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1811023622 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2070644787 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590551181102 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.6060519023 48.9658058833 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.25 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.875 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234767819255 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069711784526 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561796116952 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130795478893 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066789121461 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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