the chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban area in three countries and prediction for future years.
summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
the rendered line graph illustrate the data about the migration of masses village to cities in three Nations and prediction for future year.
The most striking feature to be observed is that, Iran was leading country to overtaken by the other two nations in future as individuals are likely to move in rural to urban areas.
It is clearly seen that , Incase of Iran from 2000 to 2005 the figures of people migrate towards cities slowly upsurged from 8 millions to 10 millions people however it following remarkably rising trend, elevate from 8 million to 97 million people in the given period of time from 2005 to 2025. For Indonesia, from 2000 to 2020 a considerable increasing could be seen, escalating from 10 million to 30 millions masses where as individuals who moved towards urban area is likely to be remained at the same level 30 millions masses from 2020 to 2025.
Turning to the rest of description, Incase of Russia, from 2000 to 2015 the figures of migrating people towards urban areas made a remarkable improvement, elevating from 15 million to 60 million individuals where as it is supposed to be hike in the time period from 2015 to 2025 with 89 million folks. As far as comparisons are concerned, the movement among Russia people will 4 folds more than Indonesia. Besides this, migration among 3 countries were approximately starts from same level.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1138.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 234.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86324786325 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64623377491 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.0643582414 43.030603864 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.571428571 112.824112599 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.4285714286 22.9334400587 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213765463311 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10649601274 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0229843641826 0.0843802449381 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136068610711 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0130760503696 0.0819641961636 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.