More and more people in western countries prefer to live alone
Why is this ?
Do the advantage outweigh the drawbacks?
Having more time to fix self-character is the reason for people living alone in western regions. Nonetheless, it is considered that cause would make people stressful, overtaking the positive side.
Granted, living alone for people is one of the way to gain relaxation since they may have problems, creating self-correction to build personality. When inhabitants feel pressure in the society life, they usually decide to consider the kinds of mistake which was they made, making them self-isolated from their environment. Therefore, they have need of some peace for their-self, finding the solution to solve the trouble. To illustrate, there are around 30% of Spanish's’ choose to have relaxation like listening instrumental piano and read such journal to fix the character, and this occurs because they obtain guiltiness which cannot finish analyzing data in their company.
On the other hands, this options contain a negative impact for people as well as producing stressful, and this leads to become loneliness. However, this bring people more calm down, doing the activities without distribution from others, but if this continuously transpires, they often decide to hurt their-self. according to survey from World Health Organisation in 2021, they invent around 20% British's’ who stay in home suffering from loneliness disease due to lack communication with others, while another survey discovers that people are likely to cry rather than going to the physiologist to tackle this one, causing by feeling loneliness.
To sum up, people living in private condition are caused of needing more time to tranquil, while this will make them feeling forlorn. Where possible, if this continuously run, the risk condition like heart attack would be occurred.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: According
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, nonetheless, so, therefore, well, while, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4652014652 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88773887524 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648351648352 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.6624318052 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.636363636 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20519879438 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885084494742 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844026820339 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144912326479 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623905005286 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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