Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things they like to do-rather than doing things they should do.
It is undeniable that these days, there are more and more entertainments in our life. People feel more enjoyable doing the things they like than the thing they have to do. In this regard, this is a controversial issue among people as it determines the comfortably of life in comparison with the past. As far as I concern, people spend most of their time for doing things they should do, and I will delve in to my reasons in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, it goes without doubt, doing an enjoyment activity may waste our time. As a matter of fact, nowadays in most of countries around the world we encounter economic crises. Thank to this, people have to learn and improve various kinds of skills to find a suitable job with high salary. Hence, they prefer to use their time in reasonable way instead of wasting their time by doing entertainments. For example, students prefer to work in library, cafeteria, and companies instead of relaxing as they want to be ready for future job or earn money for their tuition payment.
Secondly, in modern world with the advancement of the technology, most of the people are eager to learn about news thing to keep pace with others. Therefore, they spend their time on education, and take participate on different courses. For instance, students are willing to learn and speak second or even third language beside their native language. In contrast, in the past, education was not a fundamental matter, and people spend most of their time on relaxing or personal enjoyment-doing.
Thirdly, people have learned to pursuit their own goals nowadays. Hence, they are more hardworking and persuasive in this competitive life. They want to rely on themselves, and use their time perfectly. However, we should not ignore other side completely. Working and studying full time with no leisure time and no relaxing is harmful for our health. Our body needs some enjoyment, and doing social activities for feeling healthy.
Finally, according to all above mentioned reasons, it is crucial to use our time in reasonable way because, we have to improve skills to get a job, and to take pace with modern world. Furthermore, to reach our goals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 113, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the countries') or simply say ''most countries''.
Suggestion: most of the countries; most countries
... time. As a matter of fact, nowadays in most of countries around the world we encounter economic ...
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Line 4, column 277, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...r side completely. Working and studying full time with no leisure time and no relaxing is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, for example, for instance, in contrast, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1809.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90243902439 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70012826287 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531165311653 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6965050248 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1428571429 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 5.45110844103 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336672980499 0.236089414692 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103900546241 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143428076778 0.0737576698707 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19539349082 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.151816419672 0.0645574589148 235% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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