The chart below shows the percentages of industry sectors' contribution to the economy of India and Turkey in 2000.
The pai chart compare the percentages of industry sectors' contribution to the economy of India and Turkey in year 2000.
Overall, the largest proportion of contribution in India is agriculture and in Turkey is Healthcare and education, while construction, manufacturing, finance business and other,government are other significant things. Moreover, trade, utilities and transportation,Leisure and hospitality are also largest networks of contribution.
According to the first chart, the chart is for India and the most contribution is for agriculture(24% the highest contribution) , trade, utilities and transportation(14%), healthcare and education(17%),leisure and hospitality (17%),while government also considerable proportion which is 12%. The least contribution is for construction(merely 3 percent),manufacturing (8%), and the remaining 5% is contribute on finance, business and other.
The second chart shows the data for Turkey here most contribution is for healthcare and education(17%), trade,utilities and transportation(16%),on leisure and hospitality and agriculture contribution is 14%,while manufacturing is also considerable which is 12%. The least is finace,busines and other(only 8 percent),for government(9%) and for construction they contribute 10%.
- The chart below shows the percentages of industry sectors contribution to the economy of India and Turkey in 2000 73
- The pai chart compare the percentages of industry sectors contribution to the economy of India and Turkey in year 2000 Overall the largest proportion of contribution in India is agriculture and in Turkey is Healthcare and education while construction manu
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , government
...anufacturing, finance business and other,government are other significant things. Moreover,...
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Suggestion: , Leisure
...ver, trade, utilities and transportation,Leisure and hospitality are also largest networ...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'also the largest'.
Suggestion: also the largest
...nsportation,Leisure and hospitality are also largest networks of contribution. According ...
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... agriculture24% the highest contribution , trade, utilities and transportation14%,...
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Suggestion: , manufacturing
...tion is for constructionmerely 3 percent,manufacturing 8%, and the remaining 5% is contribute ...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'contributed'.
Suggestion: contributed
...nufacturing 8%, and the remaining 5% is contribute on finance, business and other. The...
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...s for healthcare and education17%, trade,utilities and transportation16%,on leisure and ho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 6.8 265% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 33.7804878049 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 18.0 3.97073170732 453% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1092.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.53892215569 4.92477711251 133% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.51132362133 2.65546596893 170% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51497005988 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 327.6 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.45097560976 138% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.1064592819 43.030603864 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.0 112.824112599 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.427946180369 0.215688989381 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.232784493696 0.103423049105 225% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.205865416757 0.0843802449381 244% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.341132352309 0.15604864568 219% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.205504582351 0.0819641961636 251% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.3 13.2329268293 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 14.29 61.2550243902 23% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 6.51609756098 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 10.3012195122 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 20.95 11.4140731707 184% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.0658536585 190% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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