In most countries reason he’s up and effective solution to a problem of crime some people think it is a more effective solution to provide a better education to what extent do you agree or disagree
Nowadays, the crime rate is increasing with high propagation. Prison is an accurate solution for crime in major countries. But few citizens believe that providing a better education rather than prison is an effective solution for u social work. This essay will explain why education is the better option for reducing the crime.
To starts with, there are plenty of positive aspects of education, which declined the rate of crime. First and foremost, the main reason for the crime is poverty or unworthiness, which will solve by providing education, because that generates job or work opportunity. Ultimately, the problem of crime and poverty will reduce. For example, Pakistan has the highest ratio of crime because the government is failing to provide work or job to their peoples.
Furthermore, education helps to earn as well as develop their better human beings, who are knowing which activity is good or bad for their country. And stop doing that work that harms their nation. Fear of tourism is temporary, but the understanding of the situation is long-lasting, which come from the study. For example, In Japan, the education ratio is the highest among the other countries, therefore the crime rate is the lowest.
To sum up, education is the best option for solving the crime problem, because that helps to remove the main reason of crime as well as developed human mind for becoming a better human being, who are never thinking to do unsocial work, which harms the nation and society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, so, therefore, well, for example, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1221.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06639004149 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65716370035 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51867219917 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2810980553 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9230769231 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5384615385 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208536322796 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777229059424 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565861681749 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133996818156 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553265322726 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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