The given graph shows the consumption of fast food in the UK (per week) from 1970 to 1990.
Write at least 150 words.
The given line graph illustrates the amount of convenience food consumption in the UK over a period of 20 years
Overall, the consumption of pizza saw a rapid decline while the quantities of hamburger, fish and chips consumed increased dramatically
In 1970, the amount of pizza consumption started at the highest point, at 300 grams. At the same time, the quantity of fish and chips consumed was rapidly lower than pizza consumed, at 90 grams, compared to only 40 grams of hamburger consumption. Meanwhile, the year 1980 saw a slight decrease in the amount of pizza consumed, at around 200 grams whereas the figure for hamburger, fish and chips rose gradually ro approximately 100 grams and 150 grams respectively
In 1990, it can be seen that the consumption of fish and chips experienced a dramatic increase of 350 grams to 500 grams and became the highest figure in the line graph. At the same time, rhe figure for hamburger remarkably rose by 200 grams to 300 grams. By contrast, the amount of pizza consumption witnessed a rapid decrease of 100 grams to 200 grams and stood at the lowest point in the line graph
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77835051546 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75701888844 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479381443299 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 22.4926829268 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.111134107 43.030603864 274% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 185.4 112.824112599 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.8 22.9334400587 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159221557121 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948098683453 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630536528848 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112870138672 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606942592937 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 13.2329268293 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.83 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.3012195122 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.9970731707 156% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.