You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.
Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter
explain why you are writing
describe your circumstances
ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course
You do NOT need to write any addresse
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to inform you that I am interested to enroll in computer course that is being provided by your college.
I got to know that those who have completed an elementary course can only do this course but, because of financial adversities, my parents were not able to provide me formal education , that is why I never did any elementary course. However, I am very hardworking and dedicated person and I am very eager to learn computers. Furthermore,today there is huge demand of computers to do any job that make me eligible to earn money if I earn it.
So, I request you if any special exemptions your college can provide me , I will highly obliged . Moreover, you can take my interview to check my basic level of education and interest towards computers. In addition, if you can grant any scholarship that reduce my monetary burden would be wonderful. If you select me to take admission in this course please contact on this number 12345678. I would be very grateful to you.
Thankyou.
Yours faithfully,
Nancy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... not able to provide me formal education , that is why I never did any elementary ...
^^
Line 5, column 337, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , today
...ry eager to learn computers. Furthermore,today there is huge demand of computers to do...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 72, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...l exemptions your college can provide me , I will highly obliged . Moreover, you c...
^^
Line 7, column 89, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'oblige'
Suggestion: oblige
... college can provide me , I will highly obliged . Moreover, you can take my interview t...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 96, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e can provide me , I will highly obliged . Moreover, you can take my interview to ...
^^
Line 7, column 301, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... my monetary burden would be wonderful. If you select me to take admission in this...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81868131868 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83794594389 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620879120879 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2848045037 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 4.34317383033 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259731238117 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953229203371 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618310912243 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175729372141 0.12726935374 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424108569391 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.