College students should be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them rather than the courses that seem most likely to lead jobs.
None of the choice is unnecessary one. Actually it is not exceptional for entering students to think deeply in the decision for months perhaps year and then a decision gets decided. The prompt recommends that students should not ruminate whether it will lead them in future job market but choose the path that interests them from the core of mind. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this assertion and argue that students should look their choice without looking outer world for two reasons.
The chief reason why I generally agree with the statement is that the job market is ever shifting and today’s high paying payable job is another decade’s cheap and less available job. So, to choose one’s profession based solely on the availability of the job by doing only prediction is very unconvincing as there still remains many confusions. For instance, till 2000 year, petroleum and mining engineering was as rapidly growing field as most of the nation felt demand of fuel. So, most of the graduates would get high salary and would be joined immediately after graduation. But due to the issue related to green energy and the severe impacts of fuel on greenhouse effect and it’s scarcity, Prediction are shifting, specially the developed nations,
toward renewable energy like solar based energy and currently it’s being used mostly in highly developed nations. As a result, current petroleum engineer’s demands are far away from the earlier 2000 era. The above example illustrates that the job market is highly contingent upon many unpredictable factors and that if one assumes it is as static, she is likely to get burned at some points as current technological advancement is very likely to be replaced by better one.
Moreover, if it’s considered that job market will be same as now like mass, The universal constant, one should still runs for her/his interest because easiness plays a pivotal rule in how we effectively work. Likely, in case a student is passionate to study in anthropology but chooses the path of computer science engineering due to the abundance of high paying job opportunities. He has to run the risk of finding himself in a field where he feels uneasiness and will spend time with no satisfaction. He might go to work regularly but having no interest will give bad service to the company under which he works for. So the above example also illustrates the point not to take a subject without passion.
In sum, of course some argues that in our globalized economical competition, highly paying jobs are much prioritized and so one should follow this path but this cannot ensure what might be happened in time. So, if we follow our interest, it’s likely to do the best job possible and very likely to compete at the highest level.
- No field of study can advance significantly unless outsiders bring their knowledge and experience to that field of study 66
- Much of the information that people assume is factual actually turns out to be inaccurate Thus any piece of information referred to as a fact should be mistrusted since it may well be proven false in the future 66
- College students should be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them rather than the courses that seem most likely to lead jobs 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, look, moreover, so, still, then, as to, for instance, of course, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2308.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 468.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93162393162 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66369273135 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 215.323595506 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566239316239 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 725.4 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.34303747 60.3974514979 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.222222222 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 23.4991977007 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 5.21951772744 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231827489852 0.243740707755 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649265960571 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564677149488 0.0758088955206 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125721051893 0.150359130593 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271056640148 0.0667264976115 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 100.480337079 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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