Some people say a person’s success in adult life is the result of the way they were brought up as a child by their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is considered by some that people success relies on their parent’s upbringing. However, I disagree to this point of view because I believe that person's success determines by his own motivation, hard work and their key interest.
To begin with, success always comes to those who are resilience and hardworking. Those who never loose their patience and keeps on learning from their mistakes will turn out to be successful in their life. A good illustration of this is, Albert Einstein being a failure at school, but his dedication and motivation towards something to achieve big in life made him a successful scientist. Even though his parents were not scientist but his true efforts leads him to led a successful life.
Another factor behind person's success is their key area of interest. If a child born in the doctor’s family then that doesn't mean that child will turn out to be a doctor. As Bill Gates set a good example of this as being a son of farmer he becomes the co-founder of Microsoft company. A software which is being used and is installed in almost everyone’s computer. This shows that although he raised in farmer's family but area of interest was in engineering which as a result, he become an extremely successful Entrepreneur.
In conclusion, although parent's upbringing plays a significant role in determining person's success but in my opinion other factors such as self motivation, hard work and the interest area are the crucial pillars behind individual success.
- Some people say a person s success in adult life is the result of the way they were brought up as a child by their parents To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- Some people say a person s success in adult life is the result of the way they were brought up as a child by their parents To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- Some people say a person s success in adult life is the result of the way they were brought up as a child by their parents To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- Some people say a person s success in adult life is the result of the way they were brought up as a child by their parents To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- Fossil fuels are the main source of energy around the world However people are being encouraged to use alternative energy sources such as wind energy solar energy and so on Do you think this is a positive or negative development Why 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 148, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...is point of view because I believe that persons success determines by his own motivatio...
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Line 2, column 46, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...gin with, success always comes to those who are resilience and hardworking. Those who n...
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Line 2, column 97, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...lience and hardworking. Those who never loose their patience and keeps on learning fr...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...successful life. Another factor behind persons success is their key area of interest. ...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... success is their key area of interest. If a child born in the doctor’s family the...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...d born in the doctor’s family then that doesnt mean that child will turn out to be a d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.988 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82879196831 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3278014076 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.916666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214555639215 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841674541517 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650372409498 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13509474205 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541346691455 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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