Some people prefer doing the same things all the time. Others, however, think that changes are necessary. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.
There is a position that people should stick to constant actions. However, there is another point of view, changes in life bring a good result. In this essay, I will consider both statements and make a conclusion about my position.
There is no denying that there are people who feel comfortable with routine activities, especially older people who do not seek changes in their lives. For these people, the structure of life is the center of the comfort zone. people who live by this principle simply convinced themselves that this way of life is the safest for them, they are afraid of changes and at the same time avoid many opportunities.
On the other hand, change brings new experiences and trends to our lives. Often, success comes during the research of something new. It was researchers who pushed our society to develop, invented new crafts, studied medicinal plants, and built cities. Even small changes sometimes improve your life, such as choosing a new route, it helps to avoid routine and stress. Of course, changes do not always lead to good things in your life, but if you do not take risks, you will never know new emotions.
In conclusion, I want to express my opinion. I believe that you need to get out of your comfort zone, because changes in your life are important for your personal growth, and small changes in everyone's life can change the world. You need to overcome the feeling of fear of innovations, because life always brings surprises, and you need to be prepared for them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...life is the center of the comfort zone. people who live by this principle simply convi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, in conclusion, of course, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80842911877 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46842630108 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2590677058 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6428571429 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195816007759 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063013940872 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496216683762 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114211948223 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.010387663379 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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