Some people believe that children should do organised activities in their free time while others believe that children should be free to do what they want to do in their free time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
While many people are definitely certain that children should do planned activities in their leisure time, others hold the view that they should have freedom enough to do everything they desire. From my perspective, I concur with the latter.
On the one hand, I understand why some people argue that children should do structured activities. First, they might suppose that most optimal schedules are researched and planned by many professional educators. So these research would bring benefit and ensure that children can develop their mind in the best way. Second, they think youngsters should follow their available schedule but if their parents organize these activities without considering their children’ inborn talents, their children might be under the pressure or become more naughty because of overprotection.
On the other hand, I would side with those who believe that children should have their own spaces to improve their abilities. According to many parents who let their children do what they want to, they are very proud of their children who may become more active and creative later, they do not have to teach their child about how they can enhance their soft skills. Furthermore, letting children do everything they want is the best way to make them independent. They can achieve the most success in the future thanks to their characteristics which have been developed by themselves.
In conclusion, I completely agree with those who believe that children should persue their hobbies because it is beneficial for their overall development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33870967742 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67774725936 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584677419355 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.7191035524 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.363636364 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5454545455 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.431082922718 0.244688304435 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167780459185 0.084324248473 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115715195761 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.28298335199 0.151304729494 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671025086022 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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