scientist and other researchers should focus their research on areas that are likely to benefit the greatest number of people.
societies in the world today, have several problems or challenges that they are confronted with. In an event where knowledge is limited on an issue, scientist and researchers are called upon to find solutions to the problems that society faces. scientists and other researchers are expected by nations to find solutions to the problems that could pose a threat to human race and therefore, every attempt is made to focus research on areas that could benefit the greatest number of people. However, i mostly disagree for two reasons.
First, each individual, community or nation has its own perculiar needs and challenges. Is the author claiming that all individuals in a community or a country face the same problems or challenges? Research does not only seek to solve challenges that only affect only the majority, but also individuals in the society. To illustrate, Saudi, Arabia has its own challenges with the practice of democracy. Should researchers in the area of governance stop researching on the reasons why democracy is failing in that country? In cases where the cost of the cost or the financial burden of the research is prohibitive, nations must find such financial resources. This is because very live is important.
In addition, focusing research on issues of the minority in the society is tantamount to safeguarding or protecting the greatest number of people in the community or nation. For example the outbreak of pandemic starts with individuals or small group of people within the community. Ignoring research on such instances would not protect the majority of the people.
Admittedly, focusing research on issues that affect the majority of the people in some cases is crucial for the sustenance of the human race is very crucial, the protection of the minority is equally paramount.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 295.0 442.535393258 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21016949153 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84849456503 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51186440678 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.4754378902 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.466666667 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.21951772744 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342101161421 0.243740707755 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948631513225 0.0831039109588 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115319131446 0.0758088955206 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194099912679 0.150359130593 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595705896266 0.0667264976115 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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