Most people agree that money cannot be happiness. Why is happiness difficult to define? How can people achieve happiness?
Every individual has a different opinion about happiness. While few believe that money can bring happiness in their life, others have a contrasting view. As happiness depends upon a person's perspective or desire towards life, it is complex to measure it by defined parameters. In this essay, I will cite the reasons behind the difficulty to narrate it as well as simple solutions to be happy in life.
On one hand, although happiness is defined to be a state of mind where an individual feels content, stress-free or satisfied, there are a plethora of emotions that are linked to this expression. For instance, an event that occurred can endow a sense of satisfaction to an individual but on contrary, it might prove stressful to others. In recent times, a lot of people link happiness with money earned, dream job, or materialistic things purchased rather than with instances that genuinely bring satisfaction in their life like being with dear ones. Thus, pleasure is a complicated feeling which can be defined using a set of parameters.
However, humans can gain happiness by practicing some simple methods in their life. For example, a person could be happy if he spends quality time with his dear ones; people can feel achieved if they will reserve time for their hobbies or following their likings. Furthermore, if a person can earn enough to fulfill his family's needs as well as be able to live a respectful life, then the home leads a satisfying life. Henceforth, even if there is a misconception about complications for being happy in life, in reality, it is very easy.
To conclude, being happy is not a complicated task to achieve provided a person follows his heart and does things as per his or her aspiration. Moreover, a person can be mentally satisfied if he could see his family happy and be able to spend some quality time with them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 183, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...sting view. As happiness depends upon a persons perspective or desire towards life, it ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85849056604 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80164678613 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556603773585 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3361788641 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.357142857 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321569853935 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119343386475 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053821834953 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210770307797 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0114492681748 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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