The spread of multinational companies and increasing globalization and have positive effects on everyone. Do you agree or disagree?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience
Companies have expanded their business to the global context from manufacture to sale on the path to ultimate profit, giving rise to globalization. Some assume this change must have encouraged each individual, but I have reservations about it due to its absolute nature.
It is undeniable that this trend benefits the majority of people worldwide. The most incredible benefited party is the manufacturers. The shareholders who have brought down the cost increased the sale range geographically, eventually accumulating vast amounts of fortune. The cost reduction requires factories built in developing regions for a cheaper labour force, so local workers, despite the small income compared with the previous party, can get rid of poverty and meet life demands as long as they take part in the process. Also, products become more accessible and affordable for consumers because of the lower cost of production and more efficient distribution.
However, two victims should not be ignored due to some local producers and workers in high-income countries. For local merchants, competition with big international business is incompatible and impossible, and usually, their companies will end up with bankruptcy or take-over. Regarding blue-collar workers in developed countries, their positions either have been less rewarding or taken by more inferior competitors overseas. The change may have been too sudden for them to make an immediate reaction and reconsider their career, only to take up underpaid jobs or suffer from unemployment.
In short, although most people are enjoying the increase of globalization, some people or more may be overwhelmed by this formidable current.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y accumulating vast amounts of fortune. The cost reduction requires factories built...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, regarding, so, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59375 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11348464282 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.67578125 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8913701342 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.333333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11123288081 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0376828383191 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364476721811 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0656912006014 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384036986598 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.