You are currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course.
Write a letter to the college Principal. In the letter
give details of your course
explain why you need a week off
say what you want the Principal to do
Respected Sir,
I am Mr Shreyas Parab, student of first year Bachelor's in Management course, the identification number is 123456. Due to unavoidable circumstances, I would request you to grant me a precautionary leave for seven days.
Recently, while working part-time in a restaurant, one of our colleagues has tested positive for COVID-19, and we have come in contact frequently in the daily chores assigned to us. So far I have no symptoms, additionally, the test result is negative in my case, however, as a preventive measure it has been asked by the healthcare authorities to isolate myself for consecutive seven days, before taking another test.
I request you to grant me the leave, also to extend the deadline for project submission which is due next week. Additionally, I request to provide provision to attend lectures online, until I get my another medical test result negative.
For your reference, the medical report is attached with the letter, and the letter hardcopy is sent through my friend as a safety protocol.
Yours sincerely,
Shreyas Parab
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04597701149 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90775065512 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649425287356 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 174.0 16.3608247423 1064% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 878.0 76.5299724578 1147% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 174.0 16.8248392259 1034% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 35.0 4.34317383033 806% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11466801403 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11466801403 0.0766984524023 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0687926318489 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266877360509 0.0580467560999 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 89.4 8.37731958763 1067% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -105.13 70.7449484536 -149% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 71.2 7.45979381443 954% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.19 8.71597938144 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 16.53 7.59969072165 218% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 8.62886597938 684% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 71.6 8.54432989691 838% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 72.0 8.15463917526 883% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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