Young people today are often less polite and show less respect than previous generations. Why do you think this is? What can be done to solve this problem?
Modernization and adaptation of western culture in the society have changed the way of thinking in youngsters drastically. Consequently, young generations have annoyingly rude and disrespectful towards their elders. This essay will discuss why this is happening and put forward several solutions for this issue.
To begin with, the concept of nuclear families and busy work schedule has made individuals less sensitive, unsympathetic, depressed and frustrated. Neither parent nor grandparents are available for their children to preach them the importance of moral values and as a result, more and more teenagers are becoming ill-mannered and often lack discipline. For instance, it was customary, in older times, to take blessings of seniors before starting the day, but today such practices have become obsolete. Therefore, it is critical to devise particular steps to tackle this matter.
Parents and teachers should jointly work out to solve this problem effectively. At an elementary level, schools should encourage students to take up subjects like moral science and motivate them to indulge in voluntary work which involves dealing with older people. Such exposure would help children to understand the importance of hardships people go through and respect them for their hard work. Secondly, parents should make sure their child visits his or her grandparents regularly so the bond of love and respect does not get lost among them. In addition, a child witnessing his or her parents respecting their elders would leave positive impositions in their young minds.
In conclusion, it can be reiterated that young people today are disrespectful and impolite compared to the older generation. Although, there is scope of improvement, provided parents and teachers work together to solve this matter for the sake of better future generations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40492957746 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80636011796 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62323943662 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 284.0 20.2975951904 1399% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1535.0 106.682146367 1439% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 284.0 20.7667163134 1368% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 120.0 7.06120827912 1699% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218441297287 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.218441297287 0.084324248473 259% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138375338586 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056861504791 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 146.0 13.0946893788 1115% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -225.24 50.2224549098 -448% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 115.2 11.3001002004 1019% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.52 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.45 8.58950901804 261% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 61.0 9.78957915832 623% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 115.6 10.1190380762 1142% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 116.0 10.7795591182 1076% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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