Your office building does not have parking available.
Write a letter to the manager. In your letter:
-explain the problem
-suggest a solution
-say why parking would benefit all employees
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my concerns related to the non-availability of car and motorbike parking near the office building.
Recently, the public parking just opposite to our office building was available for our company workers which were provided by the state government has been shut down as someone has bought the land to build a commercial complex. As a result, I have to park my car at the metro station parking which consumes time and money in our daily schedule. Plus, it takes fifteen minutes of daily walking to come to the office entrance.
Therefore, I request you to please rent an underground space for parking in our building which is available for a long time. The area covers around 2000 square meters that hold an ample amount of space for all the staff members to park their cars in this available spot.
If this underground place will be reconstructed into a parking spot for our employees, there will be two benefits from this outcome. Firstly, convenience and comfort will be provided to all staff members. Another benefit will be that all employees will be on-time or before time to the offices according to their work hours.
I am hoping to hear a positive response from you.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...lking to come to the office entrance Therefore I request you to please rent an undergr...
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Line 7, column 268, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o park their cars in this available spot If this underground place will be recons...
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Line 9, column 319, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he offices according to their work hours I am hoping to hear a positive response ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, therefore, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1041.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81944444444 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52161013267 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 216.0 16.3608247423 1320% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1041.0 76.5299724578 1360% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 216.0 16.8248392259 1284% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 46.0 4.34317383033 1059% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243560431683 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.243560431683 0.0766984524023 318% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114774801591 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681087110979 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 109.3 8.37731958763 1305% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -139.3 70.7449484536 -197% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 86.4 7.45979381443 1158% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.16 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.71 7.59969072165 233% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 8.62886597938 614% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 88.4 8.54432989691 1035% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 53.0 8.15463917526 650% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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