Many people believe that modern music can have a negative impact on the young. Other believe the effect of modern music is positive
Discuss both these views and give your opinion
In modern life, with the remarkable development of entertainment, music has constantly arisen with many different genres such as Rock, Rap, Pop,... A few people assert that listening to contemporary music is bad for the young generation, whereas others endorse the present-day music due to its positive effects. In this essay, I will discuss both the views.
On the one hand, it is clear that modern music definitely influences the young age positively in mental health. With the novelty in the lyrics as well as melody in songs, music has a tendency to help the youth generate positive emotions and excitement when doing anything. For example, college and school students face depression and anxiety due to homework and exams. During this period, they usually choose the way that listening to a motivational song, it will boost their confidence and energize their will to perform their best without nervousness.
On the other hand, many people, especially those from older generations, feel that modern types of music can be more harmful than positive. Modern music, whose song lyrics usually involve bad language that might tempt adolescents to also use them in daily life. For instance, today's rap music mainly talks about sex, drugs, alcohol, and things of that nature that automatically puts those things in a teenagers head and lead them start to mimic that same behavior.
To conclude, I firmly believe that music should not be blamed because it plays an important role in society by giving young people better quality of life in terms of mentality. Regarding the negative trends, even though some lyrics are full of violence and swearing, people should be aware of and make better choices about what songs they listen
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, well, whereas, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98591549296 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45154389048 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616197183099 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 284.0 20.2975951904 1399% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1416.0 106.682146367 1327% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 284.0 20.7667163134 1368% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 105.0 7.06120827912 1487% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329567726207 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.329567726207 0.084324248473 391% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185799547292 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715777268597 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 144.1 13.0946893788 1100% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -216.78 50.2224549098 -432% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 114.1 11.3001002004 1010% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.14 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 21.84 8.58950901804 254% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 9.78957915832 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 115.6 10.1190380762 1142% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 59.0 10.7795591182 547% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.