pros and cons of studying abroad
A growing number of students nowadays have the tendency to study abroad during their time in high school or university. This subject brings both advantages and disadvantages.
Sending students to study abroad can broaden the mind of them. In developing countries like Vietnam, the scientific research implementing ability and studying advanced knowledge are still, quite limited. Therefore, schools for specialized students have been established to develop the country. However, the limited source of information and arduous task of theoretical learning seems to be difficult for the country to attain the ambition of development. Because of that, sending students in specialized schools to absorb the knowledge in developed countries, then practise them in Vietnam is a novel idea.
Nevertheless, the cons are quite discernible. One of the top prestigious high school in Vietnam, or as many people would consider the highest ranking specialized school in Vietnam - Hanoi Amsterdam, has been sending 35% of its students each year to top universities from all over the world since the beginning of the school. Unfortunately, contrary to the expectations of those Vietnamese who pay an incredible amount of tax to support Hanoi Amsterdam, most of these students prefer to stay and serve the countries they studied without returning. This debatable topic has lead to a controversial discussion about shutting down Hanoi Amsterdam in 2020. More surprisingly, this debate was started by a Vietnamese professor - who spent his high school year in Hanoi Amsterdam.
These two points which have just been raised are just subjective perspective of mine which mainly only consider the pros and cons of studying abroad bring to an impoverished country, Yet, there still benefits and drawbacks studying abroad bring an individual.
In conclusion, studying abroad bring both advantages and disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44290657439 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92121047242 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560553633218 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 289.0 20.2975951904 1424% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1573.0 106.682146367 1474% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
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Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
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Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.243064036739 0.084324248473 288% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168339102089 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105799493142 0.056905535591 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 148.7 13.0946893788 1136% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -230.32 50.2224549098 -459% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 117.2 11.3001002004 1037% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.75 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.12 8.58950901804 258% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 63.0 9.78957915832 644% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 117.6 10.1190380762 1162% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 118.0 10.7795591182 1095% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.67 Out of 6
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