An American film actor once said: "Tomorrow is important and precious". Some people think individuals and society should pay more attention to the future than to the present. Do you agree or disagree?
Several people assume that the future is more important than the present, so each individual is encouraged to focus much more on the future. In my opinion, the current things are important as well as the future ones.
It is irrefutable that if a person has a desire to prepare everything in advance, like: career or marriage, well, he needs to build a strong foundation from now – the present time. Therefore, the things he does now are the premises to promote himself in the future. For instance: in the upcoming periods, he has a dream of becoming a fashionista, if he does not do anything, he can not gain this, but if he learns about how to makeup, how to pose with a camera or what the trend now is, he will find it easily to pursue her own dream.
Also, by concentrating on the future, people will have the clear aims in their life, they will not lose direction, get lost and can not realize the interesting and meaningful things, which results in the lack of passion in modern life.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that these days, there are lots of youngsters live and do “for nothing” or others just daydream, which do not help them to gain sucessful. In the long term, planing wisely for the future by preparing the present is still the best way.
- An American film actor once said Tomorrow is important and precious Some people think individuals and society should pay more attention to the future than to the present Do you agree or disagree 56
- In the past lectures were used as a way of teaching large numbers of students but now with the development of technology for education many people think there is no justification for attending lectures 67
- In the past lectures were used as a way of teaching large numbers of students but now with the development of technology for education many people think there is no justification for attending lectures 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, therefore, well, for instance, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29361702128 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34943719603 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574468085106 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 235.0 20.2975951904 1158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1009.0 106.682146367 946% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 235.0 20.7667163134 1132% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 82.0 7.06120827912 1161% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140295220804 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140295220804 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962442798765 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0883729671456 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 116.3 13.0946893788 888% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -150.13 50.2224549098 -299% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 92.6 11.3001002004 819% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.08 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.91 8.58950901804 209% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 96.0 10.1190380762 949% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 93.0 10.7795591182 863% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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