Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the wellbeing
of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that
the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to
make as much money as possible.
Generally, various corporations are developed with the view of impacting the society and the environment in which
it operates in a positive way or in a way the society and environment benifits.The above prompt states about the
beliefs of the people who are in favor as well as not in favor of the generalised statement.The corporations are
either built by the government of a particular country/state or by some individul or group of individuals for the
welfare of its people and the environment.However, despite the best intentions, some corporations are created only
with the aim of making money and no interest in promoting people's welfare. Such corporations are only concerned with the
profit it makes and does not use for the betterment of the sociey or the environment. Lets consider both types of corporations for broad understanding.
Corporations are available in almost every field such as technology,finance,etc and each of these corporations have their own role in promoting the wellbeing of society as well as environment but at the same time making profits for improving its efficacy.For example, let us consider the Aerospace company SpaceX which is making a considerable difference in space flight with the help of reusable rockets. The SpaceX corporation also aims at safe space travel and making space flight accessible to almost anyone thus creating a positive impact on the society and the environment. However, this does not mean that the corporation should not make money out of its ventures. The CEO of SpaceX ,Elon Musk , once said that SpaceX should make money otherwise it could not make the advancements it is making.
Also, there are certain corporations for example an NGO whose sole aim is to help the society or in a way protect the environment in general.The NGO's funds are primarily used for the welfare of the people or to alleviate the problems they are facing. For example,YUV Can is an NGO that helps people having cancer by paying for the expenses of their treatment .
In a simialr way there are corporations whose sole purpose is to reduce global warming, reduce pollution and hereby making the environment better.
On the other hand, there are corporations either private or government whose only purpose is to make money and do nothing or do anything scarcely perceptible for the wellbeing of the society.For example, the muncipal corporation, whose duty is to ensure cleanliness,check whether the roads are properly constructed , see to it that the public has no problems. Despite, the public paying taxes there is no significant response from the corporation and they seem to operate as usual, only concrned with the money its making and nonchalant towards the wellbeing of society and environment.
It is not possible to strongly agree on either of the view as both seem correct in their own way. People believe what they have seen or experienced or even heard . However, it is a general statement being made and nothing in particular is true about a particular corporation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, well, for example, in general, in particular, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2503.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 496.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04637096774 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01571863583 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.429435483871 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 818.1 704.065955056 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.2370786517 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 496.0 23.0359550562 2153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 60.3974514979 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 2503.0 118.986275619 2104% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 496.0 23.4991977007 2111% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 118.0 5.21951772744 2261% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.97078651685 241% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368684532191 0.243740707755 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.368684532191 0.0831039109588 444% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0758088955206 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12897541261 0.150359130593 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567158690013 0.0667264976115 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 250.4 14.1392134831 1771% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -431.96 48.8420337079 -884% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.92365168539 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 196.7 12.1743820225 1616% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.49 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 31.26 8.38706741573 373% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 64.0 11.8971910112 538% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 200.4 11.2143820225 1787% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.