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writing task 1 (graph)
The given bar chart shows the percentages of household items which are used 11years from 1972 to 1983.
It is clear from the chart that, the percentage of all the given items in the chart are increased without any drop in the period of 11 yrs. Telephone, central heating and vacuum cleaner hold the first three positions in the list of highest rise in consumption between 1972 to 1983 and are 35%, 25% respectively. The differences between the first two positions are only 10%, but two and three positions are just nearly half of the first two. After a decade, the use of vacuum cleaners asce...
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