In many countries today, crime tv shows are becoming more popular.
Why do you think they are popular?
What is your opinion of these shows?
Recently, many channels are competing each other on broadcasting and attracting viewers, by presenting TV shows, especially realistic crime shows. The number of spectators for such programs, is increasing and becoming popular. In my opinion, such shows must be broadcasted to educate humans, how such criminals impact on our lives and around.
On one hand, there are many reasons why crime TV shows are common. Human type like action, and such programs let the viewer more curious to watch, know what is going around. However, some learn from such show to be aware from any danger might impact to their life and how to act against it. For example, each Wednesday, a local channel in Lebanon televises a crime show, that present what, how and where the criminals did their crime no matter what it is and how they spent their time in jails.
On the other hand, such shows are important to be seen by teenagers. First, crime games motivate children’s to be strong and unfear, without knowing its consequences. Second, crime programs can be as an awareness campaign for youth, in order to be taught how to act correctly and which right way should they follow. Moreover, education is the key solution to avoid the person to be criminal. For instance, several NGOs, assist such teenagers through activities, trainings, even by presenting and demonstrating real stories from accidents happened with some lawbreakers.
As a conclusion, crime TV shows turn out to be trendy lately for several reasons, especially for awareness. Therefore, transmitting like this TV programs in my opinion is essential for teenagers, where it assist them in knowing the suitable way to go after.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06137184116 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71172727089 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606498194946 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1523247605 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.142857143 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215346772691 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792197634451 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656115040402 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134196698958 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057982568448 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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