Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time on sports. Why is it? Is it positive or negative development?
Unlike before, the younger ones give more time to computer games nowadays than participating in any physical activity. This could be because it is stress free and easily accessible to several games. This is a wrong development of the young minds and it adversely affects their health.
There are two reasons why computer games are gaining more popularity. Firstly, there are tons of games available which can be downloaded directly from the internet and with various categories. This has become is more possible because of free wifi connections. Secondly, the gaming companies provide a wide variety of games with a really high quality graphics which makes them much more attracted. Various gaming devices such as play stations and xbox have created a next level platform for gamers with virtual reality.
Despite being a mode of entertainment, computer games lead to a number of health problems. Children and even adults are stripping themselves off from the physical activities which lead to obesity, weak eyesight. In one of the news regarding this matter there was person who was continuously glued to the gaming for around 72 hours without any movement. The moment he stood up he got a heart attack. The reason being no movement leading to low blood circulation which decreased the heart rate. Moreover, these games affect the study and grades in school. There is some positivity to these games as some of them help children broaden their knowledge like puzzle games, work making games and so on.
To sum up, both types of games are equally important but kids should be encouraged to indulge more in physical games which leads to a healthy lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56619086141 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632727272727 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0170242801 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.625 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167892513059 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052297454961 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459946083866 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956339289531 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233981400978 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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