The chart below shpws the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in 5 australian cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the results of a survey in the last four weeks about people's coffee as well as tea buying and consumption in five Australian cities.
Overall, the percentage of city residents in most of the cities of Australia often visit to cafe for coffee or tea except the city named Adelaide at 49% in last four weeks.
The popular cities like Sydney,Mlebourne followed by Brisbane,Aldaide and Hobart usually buy fresh coffee under 44%.The highest consumption of fresh coffee is in Sydney at 44%.Although, most of the people buy fresh coffee as there is a trend of consuming instant coffee. We find this more in Hobart at 54% whereas in other cities the peoportion is between 52% to 46% .However, there some people who prefer to visit the cafe for coffee or tea. We find this category of people more in Melbourne at 63% and the least in Adelaide at 49%.
Thus, the comsumption of coffee is more in Melbourne at 63%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, thus, well, whereas, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 769.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68902439024 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74882350043 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542682926829 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.1482605053 43.030603864 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.166666667 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.23603664747 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199002570944 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104705742874 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695363441495 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130238883816 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718441976071 0.0819641961636 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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