You recently bought a laptop computer. A few days later the laptop stopped working. When you took it back to the shop, they refused to deal with the problem.
Write a letter to the customer service department at the company’s head office including the following
information:
the problem with the laptop
what exactly happened when you returned to the shop
what you would like the customer service department to do
and any other relevant information.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I freshly bought a laptop-Dell 250 on 26 April from ABC store on king Street. After fortnight, my laptop suddenly froze when I tried to start. By tried numerous of times, I merely end up my hope and, I finally reached to your shop.
When I returned to shop, one of your employees, gave me the worst service. I explained all the incident to your employee that, it was all happened unfortunately. Rather than configure the laptop, he put all fault on me. I asked to convince him to either repair or returned the item but, he refused to fulfill any of requirement.
All my hopes are now on your shoulders. I want you to consider at your earliest convenience because, I am computer-science student and, I need this gadget for my studies for every day. It is all up to you either repair it or refund it. I am enclosing a copy of the receipt.
I would be grateful if you would provide me with some information at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,
Rajan.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2021-04-25 | Rajanbir Singh | 84 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 171, Rule ID: ANINFOR_EVERY_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'for everyday'?
Suggestion: for everyday
... and, I need this gadget for my studies for every day. It is all up to you either repair it o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 822.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59217877095 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83655882681 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653631284916 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1304662883 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.2307692308 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7692307692 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.53846153846 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14186800903 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447949628679 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366603716971 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0864188500502 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157770384573 0.0580467560999 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.75 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.