write a letter to your brother's brother in law. In this letter, you will ask the following things.
-- When he is leaving and give Flight details
-- List of things you want him to bring.
-- What he needs to do upon arrival at Airport?
Dear dharm,
It's glad to hear that, you are coming to Canada in this fall semester. I am super excited that you are meeting your sister (Raman) after a long time. I believe that Raman will be busy in coming fall, in her work. Due to that, I will come to pick you. I want to know that, when you are boarding and, also when your flight will be touchdown in Canada airport. For this, I need your all flight details (your plane number)
I am excited, that you are coming in this fall because, you can enjoy winter as well summer in Canada. On that basis, I am considering that you need to bring normal clothes like hoddie- to survive in this weather. You can either put in your cabin bag or grab in your hand depend upon on your needs. Other than that, for daily purpose bring some clothes, undergarments and two pairs of shoes for fulfil your necessity other than that, do bring any utensil, we all have here.
On arrival, just make sure you get your study permit from border services. While passing all the security services of airport just Keep in mind, don't forget your any of your significant document. After all the rules and procedures, you will get entry, on that time bring you bags as well. Don't forget your luggage in happy moments.
I hope to see you soon and have a great journey.
Love,
Rajan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear dharm, Its glad to hear that, you are coming to...
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Line 7, column 146, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... services of airport just Keep in mind, dont forget your any of your significant doc...
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Line 7, column 290, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
...y, on that time bring you bags as well. Dont forget your luggage in happy moments. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, while, after all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 3.03092783505 429% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 50.0 32.9175257732 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1075.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 243.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42386831276 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.05812339353 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584362139918 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 324.0 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2638417157 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.7857142857 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3571428571 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250400780106 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892207656483 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559598744433 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147759491373 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581588463427 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.