Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and
supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences
shape your position.
The Darwinian theory of evolution states in any environment, there will always be struggle for the existence, and the fittest and smartest
will always survive in the end. Planet Earth has an evolution history of 800 million years. Species have evolved over time, and become
extinct, in turn to be replaced by organisms higher up the evolutionary ladder. The weaker is replaced by the strongest, which stays until
some thing even more better comes along. For millions of years this process has been occurring without any human interference. It can be
stretched to say that the same evolution process. from chimps to Homo Sapiens we have evolved in the finest versions of
ourselves. Evolution and extinction of any species is natural process critical for maintaining the balance of the existing ecosystem.
Tweaking this balance may jeopardize the ecosystem in ways unforeseen before. Through technological advancements we have reached a stage
in the evolution where we have the ability to save the species on the verge of extinction by carefully executed planning. But it should be
taken into consideration that saving that species from an extinction level event may cause ripples in the ecosystem that are more
disastrous than the alternative.
Hypothetically considering the extinction of dinosaurs, If these organisms had not gone extinct some 600
million years ago, the evolution chain which led to the creation of Homo Spaiens would have been curbed at its roots. The world we know
today would not have existed if the events in the past had not happened exactly in the way which they did. Tweaking or altering any part
of the natural process would lead to unimaginable changes in our surroundings which cannot be undone.
But on the same hand, we have reached the point where humans are already affecting the ecosystem in which we survive. we are polluting
the waters, deforesting scores of hectares of land, destroying the environment as we know it on daily basis. Effect of this mass
destruction can be seen in the dwindling numbers of the some exotic species found even in the most desolate corners of the world.
Their extinction is not a naturally planned event but a by product of the deteriorating ecosystem which sustains them. For these organisms,
our help is not only required but paramount for their survival. Because in all the words of technicality, we have put them in a position
where extinction has become an early possibility.
So, tweaking with the natural extinction of species is definitely not the optimal course of action. doing this may cause problems
that will unravel as the time goes by. But on the same time, we have to take into consideration our actions affecting the lifeline
of the species. If we find that intervention is causing the extinction, then it is our moral duty to intervene.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 12.9106741573 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2401.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 470.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1085106383 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80841473079 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510638297872 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 750.6 704.065955056 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2491373268 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.041666667 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5833333333 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.916666666667 5.21951772744 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.97078651685 463% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128908225021 0.243740707755 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0385238358298 0.0831039109588 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342431111829 0.0758088955206 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0408133087152 0.150359130593 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345406557973 0.0667264976115 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 100.480337079 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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