In the past, people used to live in larger families. What are the advantages and dis advantages of this?
Plz help me check this writing. My target grade is 6.0
There used to be a lot of people who came from larger families. It is obvious that living in this place can be beneficial as well as detrimental.
Living in a bigger family has a number of advantages. To begin with, we must acknowledge that formed generations as our grandparents gain such invaluable experience and lessons, which may help children develop moral and social awareness holistically. Furthermore, having a high-standard family makes it easier to grow a talented person in the future, which can be considered as a pride of family. Another advantage could be that, preferring the mental life, all members of the family feel truly cozy when they return home with cherished people. As a result, they are motivated to work and develop themselves in a positive manner This also significantly reduces the risk of autism.
Living in larger families can bring about several drawbacks. One disadvantage could be that the family may cost lots of money to maintain essential demand for living. Therefore, parents can be put under financial pressure, which forces them to work harder. Obviously, this causes the lack of time for their children or, by then, they can have some stress-related health issues. In addition, generation gaps can result in conflicts between grandparents and parents or children. This is one of the causes for the breakdown of the family relationships. When the relationship among members is no longer good, it not only causes them to leave their home but also commit to social crimes.
To summarize, while living in a larger family can be advantageous, it also has several downsides.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, while, in addition, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92478303714 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3764974373 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169718744152 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639886749133 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478729760512 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11696977219 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270950114185 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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