The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world Summarise the information by selection and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant

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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
Summarise the information by selection and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The given charts illustrate the proportion of water which be consumed for certain purposes in six various parts of the world.
Overall, water is used for agriculture the most in South America, Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia; meanwhile, there are huge differences in North America or Europe, which is demonstrated that water used for industrial reasons mostly.
It is clear that numerous countries belonging to agriculture civilization usually spend almost their water to demand the requirements from agricultural using, especially in Central Asia, about 88%, 3 times as high as Europe approximately. This tendency also occurs in South America, South East Asia or Africa, 71%, 81% and 84% respectively.
Utterly, Europe or North America consume around half of their water for industrial using; by contrast, they do not absolutely focus on agricultural purpose, with just 32% for Europe and 39% for North America. Interestingly, in spite of having the great percentage of water used for industry or agriculture, these areas witness a similar phenomenon, domestic using does not account significantly. Africa or Central Asia have the domestic-use figure which is higher compared to the industrial one, 9% and 7% respectively. While, the proportion of water used for domestic accounts for two fifths in total result of South America.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, in spite of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1135.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40476190476 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97190548676 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62380952381 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 283.868780488 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4006712504 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.875 112.824112599 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186911047765 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936951886054 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681651109523 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127979227311 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684301080993 0.0819641961636 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.2329268293 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 61.2550243902 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 40.7170731707 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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