Some people think that the amount of noise people make has to be controlled strictly. Others, however, say that people should be free to make as much noise as they wish. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Nowadays, people are opting to celebrate every occation in noisy and loudly due to which some critque that the amount of noise should be governed seriously, while other believe that it should be a free choice of an individual. Both the views will be discussed in ensuing paragraphs, while i support latter view.
On the one hand, people should be given enough freedom to express themself by high volume sound. Firstly, every person has the right to express themself without any restriction, this make them happy and feel good. Secondly, loud sound can also be a effective way to aware citizens about some emergency like flood, virus outbreak or natural disaster. For instance, in 2011 a deadly tsunami was faced by japan, residents were immediatelly alerted by local social groups which lead to saving lives of hundreds of innocent humans.
On the other hand, high pitch sound can also cause many problem if it is not managed effectivelly. To begin with, it can critically distrupt the mental health of children and older people. According to a research done in Cambridge University, sound above 130 decimals can cause permanent hearing defect and constraints on mental health of teenagers. Moreover, there are many medical treatments which requires a proper sleep for quick recovery, exposure to high decimal sound can disturb the sleep cycle of a patient, thus it is important for them to have a calm and peacefull environment.
Although there are certain use case of loud sound, I opine that it should be stringently govern due to disturbance and noice pollution it can cause and make life of people adverse in critical conditions.
In conclusion, it can be recapituallated that people can also use sound to aware people or create discord in calm environment where it is needed the most.
- Some people think that the amount of noise people make has to be controlled strictly Others however say that people should be free to make as much noise as they wish Discuss both views and give your own opinion 89
- due to increase in traffic congestion government impose traffic congestion tax during rush hours is it positive or negative development 61
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Suggestion: I
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Suggestion: an
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'many problems'.
Suggestion: many problems
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03010033445 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6720628988 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7581850747 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.333333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236253233018 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859122624735 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886812332618 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151819444474 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101547061238 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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