Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
people have different views about how to teach youngsters to become good members of society. Some are convinced that this is for school to take responsibilities. however, I would opine that parents play a vital role in educating children how to make significant contribution to society
On the on hand, schools give teenagers a chance to have an acquaintance which might be helpful and useful. For instance, should an individual be financially strapped, making a phone call for knowing people will be more easier. Additionally, schools help children with learning soft skills. There are numerous organizations launched by principle and headteachers in order to run a swimming course, which is highly recommended and appreciated nowadays. however, it is undeniable that schools contain a significant number of unwell students who could negatively affect on others
On the other hand, such a convenient distance that parents would easily attach to their children. Regardless of study time, family would get together at dinner time on a daily basis, what mostly ancestors do is talk about how hard their life is, accidentally it has a positive impact on children’s mind, young people would acquire these experiences and have superb views on challenges happening to them. Furthermore, it is parents who always wish children became better with all their love, not only would it make children feel they are loved but it also formulate them a golden heart. people surrounding always have a good impression with a dedicated, honest and well-organized one
In conclusion, schools educate children a great number of skills that are helpful for future but family is responsible for teaching plenty of qualities that are necessary to every individuals in society. From my perspectives, both parents and schools should strongly encourage youngsters become good members of a society
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41891891892 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99177103689 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614864864865 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.2355026329 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.818181818 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9090909091 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306270597853 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117442890928 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646544790643 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189417428601 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625687774352 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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