The migration of people to cities is one of the biggest problems facing the world's cities today. Dicuss the main causes. What solutions could be used to tackle the situation?
It is undeniable that cities are considering to make our community more attractive for individuals than the countryside in the latter-day era. People take the city for granted as a promising land where attracts lots of people to immigrate to. This essay will analyze several factors, and provide possible measures for this problem.
There are several reasons why people make up their mind to move from urban areas to rural areas. First and foremost, by far the most crucial reason is the lack of education institutes so a wide range of students come to big cities to continue their studies. In many cities, traditional teaching is supplemented by technology so that children can broaden their horizons and it also makes lessons more engaging. Another factor is that cities provide mankind a higher standard of living thanks to the availability of advanced service. Urban areas offer many employment opportunities with high salaries, better health services with modern facilities, and qualified doctors. Also, cities are the center of education and entertainment. Moreover, the current transportation and communication systems are better in any city compared to a village.
From my point of view, a number of following measures could be adopted to mitigate the problem. The immediate measure for governments is to develop the economy in the countryside so that big universities, hospitals, and factories could be built in a rural or mountainous area. A second solution is that each of us should invest more money in education in order to ameliorate schooling facilities for students. These actions, albeit small, could have a dramatic influence on the increasing number of people migrating.
In conclusion, it is clear that poor education and a low standard of living are the major catalysts for migration. Strong measures, such as establishing more amenities, big universities, hospitals and factories, should be taken to alleviate this distressing situation.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, second, so, as to, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35275080906 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01703183972 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598705501618 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5199089735 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.375 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3125 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157463341433 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516583323731 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377816322125 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0860702341615 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038792618535 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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