The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The bar charts compare the proportion of British people who buy different genres of music albums namely pop music, rock music and classical music according to genders and various age groups.
Overall, it can clearly be seen that the percentage of male listeners was higher than that of females in all three types of music albums. Another striking feature is that pop and rock music were the most famous genres of music for teenagers and adults from 16 to 34 years old while classical music attracted 45+-years-old groups and pop music accounted for the lowest percentage (around 1%).
In terms of pop music, nearly one third were male listeners and 20% were female listeners while rock music made up more than 30% and 15% respectively from both genders. From the age of 16 to 34, around 30% of listeners were pop and rock fans while those genres took up less than 20% from 35 to 45+-years-old groups. In contrast, elderly people from 45+-years-old groups were familiar with classical music, which made up approximately 20% and followed by 25 to 34-years-old groups, accounting for 15%. Both other age groups (16 to 24-years-old, 35 to 44-years-old) took up the minor percentage (1% and 2% respectively).
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 41, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...The bar charts compare the proportion of British people who buy different genres ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, third, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1001.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93103448276 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7324142265 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532019704433 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.6035712753 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.0 112.824112599 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117958048881 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671087776947 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501351362072 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111687999279 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498979584951 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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