Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Having children is less important than it was in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples.
It is undeniable that having kids is a blessing for evryone. Personally, I believe that the children play cruical role in our lives. I feel this way for several reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, children are the ones that makes us feel alive. When you have kids, you can feel the sense of the life. Additionaly, they teach us what love means to be. I say this based on my own personal experience. Before I became a mother, my life was just a rutine. I used to do the same things all over every single day. I felt that I did not have a real life. Every day was so boring and I felt so depressed. But, after I got my first baby, my first little boy, who made me a mother, my life changed completly in a positive way. My days were no longer the same routine. I started to take care of him, and feel more alive and valuable. By looking at his adorable face all day long I was feeling so happy. So, every day was my happiest day in my life. I was not feeling alone and depressed anymore. I am thankful to the God who gave me the best gift a lady can have in her life.
Furthermore, besides happiness that you can have by having a baby, you also raising a best friend who will be there for you in all situations. For example, my parents live with my brother in the same house. Now that they are turning older and having health issues, my brother is taking good care of them. He is there whenever they need help. He is the one who sends them to the doctor offices for their routine visits. He is buying for and cooking for them. If they did not have any children, they would have been alone and helpless.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 516, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... me a mother, my life changed completly in a positive way. My days were no longer the same routin...
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Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...have by having a baby, you also raising a best friend who will be there for you i...
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Line 3, column 419, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...octor offices for their routine visits. He is buying for and cooking for them. If ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, look, so, for example, i feel, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 52.1666666667 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 319.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.12539184953 4.8611393121 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19998383015 2.67179642975 82% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554858934169 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 9.59856630824 229% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.8600563153 48.9658058833 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 52.64 100.406767564 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.76 20.6045352989 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120256553883 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0345527685437 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343621234227 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0773341302203 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0128393061705 0.0645574589148 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.4 11.7677419355 37% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 58.1214874552 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.79 10.9000537634 53% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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