The bar chart below shows the percentage of australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010
The illustrated chart indicates the proportion of Australian male and female whose ages vary attending daily exercises in 2010.
The men statistics appeared to be the highest in the period between 15 to 24, at 52.8%. Thereafter, the chart bore witness a dramatic drop to 39.5% in the pre-middle age group, including the age from 35 to 44. Following by a progressive recovery, thus making 46.7 the percentage of male who maintaining practicing at their old ages, over 64.
Whereas the number of females in the teenage who exercise was the second lowest, at 47,7℅. Then, it was a significant escalation that can be seen, the women statistic reached a peak in the 45 to 54 period, increased by approximately 7%. However, the trend in over 54 was downward, the proportion slightly fell to 53% and then bottomed at 47.1% in the group of 65 and over.
Overall, there were both changes in two groups. The percentage of regularly exercising male witness first a decrease then climbed back while the one presenting female grew in the first trend and subtly plummeted in the next stage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, then, thus, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91351351351 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77610591681 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643243243243 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.588131382 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5555555556 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16736006478 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597624819176 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469344920523 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.098041984059 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049017563004 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.