Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
In this age and day, technology is becoming more and more advanced and is able to help people in work and study. While it is true that people can benefit from working and studying online at home, I believe this tendency can have some negative effects.
On the one hand, studying and working from home can be beneficial due to its convenience and safety. With the help of technology, people now do not have to go out to work daily, especially on bad-weather days such as rainy, freezing or scorching days which may cause people inconvenience and even annoyance. Moreover, staying at home working and studying can reduce the risks of road accidents and traffic jams during rush hour which have always been heated issues.
On the other hand, it is undeniable that this trend can negatively affect people's life in many ways. Firstly, it can lead to both mental and physical problems. Those who spend hours sitting at home working and studying without partaking in outdoor activities for a long time are more likely to suffer from obesity. Moreover, blue light from electronic devices such as computer can cause several eye-related diseases such as short-sightedness, known as myopia. In addition, that parents choose to educate their children from home may result in the increasing unemployment of teachers which places a burden on the society.
To conclude, although working and studying from home can bring people comfort and life security, it should be noticed that this tendency may negatively affect people's mental and physical health and even the employment of teachers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, while, in addition, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06130268199 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64932485965 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578544061303 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7451327735 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.090909091 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264235630791 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109265475335 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670867036017 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18123601734 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053665708395 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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