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The given two maps illustrate changes to the residental area located along the Olive Drive in a 30-year period, from 1980 to 2010.
Overall, it is clear that several developments on both side were made including the construction of new facilities and buildings.
Looking at the diagrams more closely, one can see that in 2010, additional housing units were erected near the park and a school was put up in order to meet the demand for education on the Eastern side of the town. Morever, various small shops were diminished to make room for a supermarket and a shopping centre, noticeably altering the commercial space in the area. On top of that, the bank was displaced by a cafe and relocated behind the community centre, which followed the decrease in size off the community centre. Lastly, the hospital remained unchanged on the southern part of the residental area.