Task 1: The bar chart shows the number of people who visited different museums in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart compares the number of visitors of four museums in London in five months.
Overall, with the exception of Science Museum, the number of visitors to each museum increased significantly from june to august, and then decreased in the following months.
According to the chart, the number of guests visited History Museum and British Museum remain unchanged in July, but later rose considerably to about 600,000 and 700,000 respectively in august. In contrast, the figures for History Museum underwent a quick decrease in September and October. During the sametime, that for Bristish Museum experienced a dramtically decline from 700,000 to 450,000, while that museums still became the most popular museums of London.
Regarding the number of visitors to National Museum, there was a slightly decline from 210,000 to 180,000 in july. Whereas an minimally increase was recorded in that in august at 300,000, month September witnessed a slightly decrease. Meanwhile, the Science Museum's fingure remain stabled between 420,000 and 400,000 in three months June, July and August, prior to rising in September. After that, the number of visitors to that museums ecperienced a remarkable decline by around 100,000.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 10, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...ums in London in five months. Overall, with the exception of Science Museum, the number of visitors ...
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Line 4, column 64, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('slightly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('decline') instead of another adjective.
... visitors to National Museum, there was a slightly decline from 210,000 to 180,000 in july. Wherea...
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Line 4, column 123, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...rom 210,000 to 180,000 in july. Whereas an minimally increase was recorded in that...
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Line 4, column 123, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('minimally') instead an adjective, or a noun ('increase') instead of another adjective.
...rom 210,000 to 180,000 in july. Whereas an minimally increase was recorded in that in august at 300,0...
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Line 4, column 214, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('slightly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('decrease') instead of another adjective.
...t at 300,000, month September witnessed a slightly decrease. Meanwhile, the Science Museums fingure...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, still, then, whereas, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1031.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42631578947 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66891929325 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5209224661 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.555555556 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144170080404 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778591260047 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059470226778 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120418901759 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604606794066 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.