Some people spend a lot of money celebrating personal family events, such as weddings and birthdays.
How important is it to celebrate such events?
Do you think people spend too much money on these events?
Together with the improvement of the living standards in modern days, people have gained higher income for themselves and their family. Therefore, some dwellers are willing to spend a huge amount of money on such family events as weddings and birthdays. Analyzed in the essay are the specific meanings behind this phenomenon and discussions on whether the celebration money is prohibitive or not.
To commence with, celebrating events relating to family is significantly meaningful to the family members. Firstly, such events mark the milestones of one family member in the maze of life, which are substantially invaluable for the whole family. To illustrate, any parents will be really euphoric when they join their kids’ weddings because they want to directly witness their children’s grown up and happiness. Secondly, it is the glue that helps strengthen the bond of the family. When it comes to birthday parties, the reunion of all members will enhance the connection among them since they have time to share the daily stories and experience with each other.
However, to judge the amount of money, different households will have different budgets for personal celebration. In terms of the average families, the celebration money is adjusted carefully while in the wealthy ones, the money is certainly huge and quite extravagant. In fact, there are cases that people pay too much for unimportant events or unnecessary ornaments, which inadvertently makes them forget about the genuine meaning of a celebration. Thus, every household should not only understand the importance of budget management but also realize the purpose of each personal event they are holding.
In conclusion, it is vital to celebrate such events for other family members since it is the time for the family to gather around. Personally, while the celebration money depends on the status of each household, it is best to have an assessment of budget in advance and avoid unnecessary events by understanding the actual purpose of every personal celebration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32098765432 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8647495743 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561728395062 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5583899157 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.142857143 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353892283816 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116529608629 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090196820086 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22184054735 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545668812882 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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