You need to fix your vehicles, but when you came to a garage, you found that it costs too high. Write a letter to your friends to ask him/her fix your truck. In your letter, you should include:
• The offer that you had from the garage
• Why you do know your friend can help you
• Your appreciation with the help.
Dear Mike,
I hope this letter finds you in a good health. I am writing to see if I could ask you a favor.
As you know, I recently bought a used car. Unfortunately, after some days of driving, I realized that the air-conditioning system of the car is not working well. I brought the car to a garage and they told me it would cost me $1000 to alter the filter to make the air come out smoothly. I was so surprised with the cost they charged me for just changing a filter.
I believe with the knowledge you obtained from the program of repairing cars at BCIT, you would be able to help me fix this small fault at a lower cost. I would be grateful and pay you an ample lunch if you could help me out with this problem.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Love,
Tracy.
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| 2021-06-10 | tracydinh412 | 61 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...arged me for just changing a filter. I believe with the knowledge you obtained...
^
Line 6, column 154, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e fix this small fault at a lower cost. I would be grateful and pay you an ample ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 637.0 937.175257732 68% => OK
No of words: 152.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.19078947368 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40158614195 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638157894737 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 186.3 290.88556701 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5919463358 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.7777777778 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261855075282 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111710016557 0.0766984524023 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816060037548 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182809925111 0.12726935374 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664989120838 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 89.08 70.7449484536 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.73 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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