Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
While some people think that looking for a work after high school is the best choice for students now, then the other suppose that modern students should have higher education for the better future with a successful career.
First,there are several benefit for the students are likely to have an access to an amount of job after high school graduated. In fact, this means that students will receive a lot of experiences after a process of efforts, which shows that they have the specialised knowledge and practical skills. As a result, the quality of life will be better with the stable income
On the other hand, being at the university or college, a wide range of relationships are certainly expanded. As there are a large amount of extra activities in that environment, they could have chances to participate. From that, they are able to take advantage of the oppotunities to learn some skills from their classmates, and expert skills and knowledge from their teachers and so on. Moreover, having the widely relationships may give them a hand in their carrer in the future.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that it makes more sense for pursuing univesity education which brings about many possibilities to success with their passion.
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- Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career while others believe that it is to a job straight after school Discuss both views and give your opinion 58
- Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school Discuss both views and give your opinion 58
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Suggestion: several benefits
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Suggestion:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'amounts'?
Suggestion: amounts
...ertainly expanded. As there are a large amount of extra activities in that environment...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, may, moreover, so, then, while, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1041.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 207.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02898550725 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70250026206 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613526570048 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.9061398785 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.125 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.875 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.875 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168365919245 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603764943549 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547638476782 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0953225801461 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510494553342 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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