Some think that it is more important for children to engage in outdoor activities instead of playing videogames To what extent to you agree or disagree

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Some think that it is more important for children to engage in outdoor activities instead of playing videogames.
To what extent to you agree or disagree?

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2021-06-19 Abdul Rehman 78 view
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 115, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...fordable thereby more accessible to the general public. This has led to development of E-games...
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Line 2, column 216, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nown as electronic games. The organizers of e games hold massive events, inviting...
^^
Line 2, column 296, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ng players from all over the globe. You dont need to be of a particular height, weig...
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Line 2, column 402, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...hese games. In other words, these games arent physically demanding, thereby more appe...
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Line 2, column 685, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
... has given new identity to children who arent physically endowed but are mentally fit...
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Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...re likely to suffer from myopia. And it cant be ignored that the number of cases of ...
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Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'cants'?
Suggestion: cants
...re likely to suffer from myopia. And it cant be ignored that the number of cases of ...
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Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ases of myopia i.e. near-sightedness are on a whole new level compared to the las...
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Line 4, column 216, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... But exposing the same for an elongated period of time is harmful to the children. Since child...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, regarding, so, as to, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98366013072 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72991639151 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614379084967 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.140365756 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.25 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152522336576 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414584799055 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431477969206 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0850303624263 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0164868214249 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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