Smoking is banned in public places. Likewise some people think that mobile phones should also be banned. To what extent do you agree and disagree ?
public ban on smoking had always been a hot topic, since years and now it is been declared as ban on smoking, there is a societal debate regarding putting a stop on the use of mobile phones in public places. While this choice could prove to be useful to a certain extent, there are more pragmmatic approaches to deal with this case which hold degree of magnitude.
On the one hand, it is an undeniable fact that using mobile phones could prove to be a nuisance if these are used in gatherings. In addition to this , the loud voice of people talking on phones can be annoying to the other persons. To illustrate this, there was an incident of quarrel between two passengers in the public transport over the issue of attending the call loudly which disturbed the other passenger and that resulted in a major fight on the spot. However, there are ways that can be strictly put forward by government which can enforce people in public places on the guidance of using phones. Playing music at such places should be entitled to a hefty fine.To conclude, there are certain achievable practices which can control the usage of phones in public rather than banning.
On the other hand, mobile phones are already proved to be need of the hour for almost every person in the fastest growing society. people are connected with their concerned family members and acquaintances over these gadgets as well as mobile phones enables people to give information about their location in case of emergency situations. if there is a ban on the use of mobile phones, then it would certainly become challenging to communicate the situations. Thus, having a phone is a boon taking into consideration the connectivity that provides to the people.
To conclude, although phones could create a disturbance environment when these are used at public places, yet ,now a days, it seems daunting task to imagine our lives without this handy gadget which has proven its worth owning it in many day to day situations.
- Smoking is banned in public places Likewise some people think that mobile phones should also be banned To what extent do you agree and disagree 73
- Smoking is banned in public places Likewise some people think that mobile phones should also be banned To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Smoking is banned on public places Likewise some people think that mobile phones should also be banned To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...which has proven its worth owning it in many day to day situations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, so, then, thus, well, while, in addition, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80758017493 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56994994354 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553935860058 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.8338210678 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.416666667 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5833333333 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23874675078 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884686389887 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493033571076 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137848734577 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598935576106 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.