The chart below shows the total number of minutes in billions of telephone calls in the UK into three categories from 1995 2002 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , separated
...of telephone calls in the United Kingdom,separated into different sectors namely-Local-fix...
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Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , National
...ifferent sectors namely-Local-fixed line,National and International-fixed line,Mobilesall...
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Line 1, column 178, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Mobilesall
...ne,National and International-fixed line,Mobilesall calls between 1995-2002. Overall,whats...
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Line 2, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , whats
...lesall calls between 1995-2002. Overall,whats stands out from the graph that a longer...
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Line 2, column 9, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
...esall calls between 1995-2002. Overall,whats stands out from the graph that a longer...
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Line 2, column 174, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Mobiles
...ke National and International-fixed line,Mobiles calls all over the year. According to ...
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Line 3, column 27, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , initially
...er the year. According to the bar chart,initially in 1995 British people talked more than...
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Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , being
...n 70 billion minutes on Local-fixed line,being higher than National and International-...
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Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Then
...d line rate by approximately 34 billion.Then it rose to fixed 90 billion in 19999.Ho...
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Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: However
...en it rose to fixed 90 billion in 19999.However,the figure showed a gradual decrease to...
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Line 3, column 254, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...ose to fixed 90 billion in 19999.However,the figure showed a gradual decrease to abo...
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Line 3, column 377, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , reaching
...ecline steadily to the end of the period,reaching to around 85 billion and hitting a low-...
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Line 4, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Billion
...t 70 billion in 2002. On the other hand,Billion of minutes in National and Internationa...
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Line 4, column 19, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a Billion'.
Suggestion: A Billion
... 70 billion in 2002. On the other hand,Billion of minutes in National and Internationa...
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Line 4, column 202, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...2 from the initial figure of 38 billion.The mobile phone calls were only 2 billion ...
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Line 4, column 276, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'grows'?
Suggestion: grows
... billion minutes in 1995 and in 2000 it grow up to approximately 25 billion.Over the...
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Line 4, column 312, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Over
... it grow up to approximately 25 billion.Over the next 2 years,this number escalated ...
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Line 4, column 333, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , this
...imately 25 billion.Over the next 2 years,this number escalated to 45 billion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, then, whereas, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1066.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52331606218 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.97286022308 2.65546596893 150% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60103626943 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 22.4926829268 213% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.592692596 43.030603864 250% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 266.5 112.824112599 236% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.25 22.9334400587 210% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.25 5.23603664747 215% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 1.69756097561 1060% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212821515836 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142055922555 0.103423049105 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569249316004 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142055922555 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569249316004 0.0819641961636 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.7 13.2329268293 217% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.3 61.2550243902 23% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 10.3012195122 225% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.62 11.4140731707 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.06136585366 122% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 11.4329268293 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.9970731707 193% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.0658536585 190% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.