In many workplaces, online communication is now more common than face-to-face meetings.Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
In this day and age, due to the advancement, every nook and corner of the world now has access of the internet and online work has become common among the workforce. This trend has far more pros than cons. The impending paragraphs will enunciate the reasons why the benefits of the aforementioned notion are more than the drawbacks.
One of the promising advantage of working online is, it saves time. When a worker is completing his duties by staying at home or any other specific place then he does not need to commute to the office regularly. Eventually, this saves time of a person. Allied to this, reduction in the expenses as person not going to pay for petrol, toll-tax, maintenance charges etcetera if he is not travelling additionally. To site an example, a recent survey by Cambridge University found that during the pandemic in 2020, almost whole world had worked on internet and was not visiting anywhere which led a decline in the monthly expenditure of a person about 25%
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Apart from this, an employee not only saves his crucial moments but also invests it on his loved ones which foster strong bonds with family members. Moreover, he can manage his social life and gatherings as well.
What is more, notwithstanding, it cannot be forgotten that this tendency could lack the productivity among the staff for work. The reason behind it is, being at home or another place colleagues sometimes might not be able to concentrate on projects or assignments as they organize household activities as well simultaneously. For instance, share market dropped by 65% in pandemic situation, this happened because the traced stock data was not water-tight as they were working from home.
In conclusion, although this ongoing process may raise few demerits. I, however, believe the countless benefits of this cannot be overlooked; therefore a careful approach is need while disfavoring this view.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 653, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...nthly expenditure of a person about 25% . Apart from this, an employee not only ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, while, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05063291139 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80763123318 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655063291139 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2722154859 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.4 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140347129252 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533618392061 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564648818562 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0795448091323 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703918501135 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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