Write an essay to an educated reader to discuss your opinions about challenges of being famous.
Being famous is the dream of many people. However, it also has many difficulties. This essay will address the challenges that famous people may encounter.
First, being famous sometimes means you lose your privacy and comfort as your behaviours are watched by the public. You will have to make every effort to maintain your good image, from trying to behave well all the time to dressing gorgeously even when you are at home to avoid having unfavourable news or photos leaked. Therefore, your life can be under much pressure.
Second, security is an important concern. If you were celebrated, your life could not be less safe than that of an ordinary person. The reason is that you might be attached by anti-fans or become the target for criminals. In fact, many movie stars, models, singers have been hit by those who do not like them or have their houses broken into by burglars.
Another challenge is that your physical and mental health can be adversely affected as a result of your strict diets to keep your body fit, a hectic life with little time to relax and the fatigue after facing tons of negative rumours. In Vietnam, some well-known singers such as Huong Tram had to have regular health check-up to find treatment for depression syndrome. Many Korean and Japanese celebrities have suicided after serious mental health problems.
In short, though celebrities have a flashy life, it is obvious that they face a number of challenges including the loss of privacy and comfort, safety and health problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...after serious mental health problems. In short, though celebrities have a flas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, well, in fact, in short, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89516129032 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43195642863 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637096774194 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7100489099 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3846153846 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0769230769 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0947929830817 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0343444478973 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0303039663314 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.052907729327 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0188745546602 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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